the most interesting part to me - how smooth and silent and sneaky he was! Big heavy beast, but total silence. wow.
Maybe being a bit more subtle might work. You know what you want - she knows what you want but try not to just grab for it
Did everything right until that last moment when his demented male brain said”I bet biting her while she sleeps will be funny as hell.” A nice cup of coffee and a “dear are you awake” at least gives a man a 50% chance of not getting claws to the face.
