The Importance Of Children

Alexandro Faria

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Hi all,

Please excuse my tardiness- things have been manic this side. So last week's article was an interesting experience: I'm not overly happy with it, but I felt it time to start changing up the tone as not to have the same predicable air. It's going to take some practice, however, as I have a very definite "flow" that I'm used to.

In addition, I found it wasn't received well, for 2 (main) reasons:
1) I come across quite preachy- people don't like being "spoken to".
2) It asks the community to take action at a personal level- enjoyment is meant to be passive.

I know this is a hunting forum, but I thought I would share my findings on writing as I know many of you (like me) are aspiring "authors" and I think there are a few things that can be learnt from this and I'd like people to learn from my errors too.

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